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This is the continuation of my first chapter, "The Night Meeting". To understand this, please read the first one :)
You opened your eyes to find you are in your bedroom.
Sitting up, your (eye c) eyes scan your surroundings.
Your room is iluminated my the moon, casting shadows against every wall.
You look over to your clock, which sat on the dresser opposite your bed.


Sighing, you slowly swing your legs off the side of your bed,begin to stand,and walk over to your window.
Placing your hands on the window sill, you look up to the moon.

"Sooner than you think, huh Jack...?"
It had been one week.

One week without Jack making an appearance.
One week of being confined at home for "running away"
Throughout the week you were at battle with yourself.
Were the things you experienced with the winter spirit only days ago a figment of your imagination?
A dream?
These things certainly crossed your mind. In fact, they ceased to leave it.
"What i saw...It couldn't have been my imagination", you thought.

Your voice lowered to a whisper.
"No...It was real"

You turn around and begin to quietly pace in your room, being careful not to wake your parents.
" was all too real" You whispered.
"The wind was so strong, and Jack..."
"He..he healed me! With ice!"
"And not..not just that...He flew...on the wind..."
You paused.

"And he..."
The floorboards creaked silently under you.
Your voice is barely audible.

"He kissed me..."
Your face burned red as the sentence rolled off your tongue.

You raised your hand, and placed your fingertips on your lips.
Ever since then, the cold feeling, the feeling of his lips,lingered on yours.

But your moment of day dreaming came to an end when you remembered how long it had been since you had seen him.
How long he made you wait.

You bit your lip, and began to pace faster.
"Sooner than you think", you muttered.
"That's what he said..."
You furled your eyebrows and stomped over to your window, disregarding your sleeping parents.

Placing a both hand on the window sill,you looked up to the sky once again.
"Well where are you Jack!?". Your voice was strained, as you tried to keep quiet.
"You said you would come back!"
You waited a moment, half expecting some sort of reply to reach you.


"You helped me before...You took me away from here..."
Tears stung your eyes and your voice began to crack.
"So why can't you take me away again, and help me Jack!?"

Your hand clenched, and you struck the window- holding it there as your head sank down into your arms, (hair c) hair hiding your tear stained face.
"Please! Just...just take me away from here...please Jack...Save me..."

Your body shook,quiet sobs filling the room.
But something strange happened.
Something cold touched your bare shoulder. And then on your back. And then your arm.
Confused, you lifted your head and looked around the room.

All around you,crystal-like snowflakes were coming from thin air, lightly fluttering around your room.
You stood up straight, hand remaining on the window.
Your (eye c) orbs darted around the room.
Your breath could be seen, and the temperature had dropped. You wrapped an arm around you.
"Snow...?" You muttered.
"Is, is this a dream?" Your eyes squinted in thought.
Suddenly, your hand, which still remained on the window, became very cold. Abnormally cold.

Turning around to the window, you looked at your hand placed on the glass.

Frost had formed around it, and, on the other side of it, was a pale hand.
Your eyes widened, and your eyes followed the arm attatched to the hand, only to meet two eyes the color of ice- peering back at you from the other side of the glass.
Your breathing became rapid and shaky.

You stepped back, your hand dropping to your side.
A smile worked it's way across your face as you recognized the visitor.

"Jack!" You exclaimed.
"It is you!"
He smiled, and cocked his head up and to the right. Signaling for you to unlock the window.
Nodding your head, you reached up, unlocked the window, and proceeded to slide it open as quietly as you could.

You stepped back from the window to allow him in, wrapping both arms around you to keep warm. The temperature continued to drop.
Once in, he leaned against his staff and gave you a smirk.

"Hey you"
You could not believe it. The spirit of winter was in your room once again.
You were speechless.

He looked at you and gave a teasing frown.
"Not much of a talker are you?".
He lowered his eyes.
"Or maybe my presence is just so awesome that you're speechless?".

You frowned.
"No, it's just that it's not every day i get a visit from Jack Frost himself. Y'know, my window frosting over, snow falling in my room..."

He chuckled, twirling his staff in his hand.
You crossed your arms.

"Especially after he claims that he will visit me soon, and leaves me alone for a week. Trapped in this house with my drunk of a father".

He ceased twirling his cane, and a look of sadness appeared on his face.
"Look, i....i know i said i would come sooner, i know. And i did but-"

You stepped closer, balling your fists, and looked straight into his icy eyes.
"Liar. You didn't come! I waited for you!"
He signed, narrowing his eyes.

"But i did come. I came every night, but you were asleep"

"You couldn't have woken me!?" Your eyebrows furrowed in anger.

"I couldn't get in. Your window was always locked. And even if i could, i would have scared you if i just...Appeared in your room out of no-where".

You signed, looking down at your crossed arms,(hair c) hair falling over your shoulders.
"Okay... Then why tonight of all nights?"

He stepped closer so that there were now only inches between you both.
"Because" he said, moving the strands of hair from your face. He made his way down to your chin, raising it so your (eye c) eyes met his.

"You were awake- you called for me." He paused, and lowered his eye lids.

"We can be alone".

Your face turned crimson as his face came close to yours, but his lips did not meet yours.
Instead they landed on your cheek.

He must have noticed the disappointment on your face, as he let out a laugh.

His hands left your face and snaked down to your hips,placing both hands on your sides.
"So", he pushed you down onto your bed, face inches apart from yours.

"I hear you have some questions for me?"

Your face was as red as a tomato, and his breath felt like ice on your hot skin.

You began to stutter. A boy has never touched you like this before.
"U-u-uh, y-yes.Q-Questions..."

His hands left your hips, he walked to your desk,taking a seat on it. He placed his staff against the wall.
"Go on then", he crossed one leg over the other.

You straightened yourself, and crossed your legs on your bed.
Pulling a strand of hair out of your face, you look over to him.

"How did you do all of...That?"

He frowned, and stepped off the desk and onto the floor.
"Right after i got comfortable, huh?", he grabbed his staff and walked over to you.
Nudging you to move over, he sat on the bed next to you and draped the staff over both of your legs.

"See this staff? It enables me to harness my powers. My powers over the weather"

You nod.
"And...whats your age?"

He scratches the back of his head as he looks at you- letting out a light chuckle.
"Physically i'm 18. But i have actually been around for about 300 years."

Your eyes widen in amazement. He looked so young.

"And why are you...Here?" you mutter.

"Why i'm here? I'm a guardian of children. I protect them"

You nod, and raise an eyebrow.
"What i mean is, why are you here with me?"

He makes a teasing face as he gives you a toothy smile.
"Well, you did call for me-"


He let out a small chuckle as he gave you a smirk.
"I'm here with you....or,I came to you at first because you asked for help that night in the park. I stayed with you because you could hear and see me. People your age usually don't."

You let out a shaky sigh
"Jack, that's so.."

He sighs as he looks down at his staff.
"In truth (your n), you're the first girl that's close to my....You're the first girl i've talked to in 300 years that's close to my physical age"

He pauses

"I've been so lonely..."

A saddened sigh escapes you, but as you begin to realize something, your face becomes a crimson red.
"So i was your first..."

He laughs, and gives you a playful smirk as he looks at you- his eyes shine in the moon light.

"You were my first kiss"

You look away from his face, and instead look towards your lap. Your (hair c) hair hiding your face.

"Well..." You start, "You were my first kiss too..."

After a moment of silence, you look up and realize Jack is also looking down into his lap, hiding his face. His body shuddering lightly.
You sigh, move towards him, and place both your arms around his shoulders, embracing him.

"You don't have to be alone anymore, Jack", you say.

As you bury your head in his neck, he does the same to you.

"Neither do you, (your n)."
Part 1: [link]
Part 3:[link]

I'm so mean to you guys XD

Okay i PROMISE lots of smexy romance in the next one.
This one just didn't have the room for it.

I know there are mistakes, but i'll fix them tomorrow. I'm going to bed >.<

Thanks for all the comments guys!

Please leave a comment and tell me what you think!
Please watch me for updates on the next chapter<3

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MosdrasTheLight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
hnnk...mah heart...
QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
hes not SMEXY hes down right SEXY
kiuoyh Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
XD jack is smexy but not as smexy as BEN Drowned! XD
ShadowxScarlet109 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
:iconruncryplz: you tease
Mayvi Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, sooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wtf THIS face >:]
AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
typo i meant THIS face  >:D
AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD OMC OH MY CHEESE!!!!  this story is SO bruce!!! : )

so...  allot of romantic things in the NEXT chapter hugh? Jack is totally gonna make this face isn't he?  >:)
unaverslittletroll Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
when he said how cool he is I thought "your notPrussia emoteok
SomeOrdinaryArtists Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SnowflakeSoup Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay!!! I love this!!! And you, for writing this, you know?
Mayvi Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Lol, thanks hun. You're sweet. I'm glad you like it.
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so adorable I want to read it and keep reading it forever but not forever cuz' I has to read the next part! X3 lol
Mayvi Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
aw, thanks hun.
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your very welcome X3
catnipeverdoop Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
Omg :""> *happytears*
xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG Oh, Jack! <3
kittyface27 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg jacks a player.

and its so sad when he said she was the only girl his age who believed or could see him.
Mayvi Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
And yeah. Lonely lil guy.
xxAlaskanChickxx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz: THIS IS AWESOME!!!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:O Thank you so much!!
*imitates the last gif >:3
xxAlaskanChickxx Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Artist
UR VERY WELCOME!!!!! :iconbrohugplz:
wolfdemongirl13 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Aw how lovely.
Mayvi Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
wolfdemongirl13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
your welcome
Mew97 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
This is better than Twilight!!!!!!! i like how it's sooo personal :snowflake::kitty::blush:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :)
Cyodee Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
....................................................................................................................................................................................................................*attempts to loosen jack's grip* too close too soon OnO
Mayvi Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha XD?
Cyodee Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SandrOops Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
kittymeow13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Whenever I scroll down to the end and I seen your icon I just have to mock its movements because it's so awesome. and the story, IS AWESOME.
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lol, oh thank you!
And i'm glad you like my lil story too :)
watch me for chapter updates?
kittymeow13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Already on it. It really sucks when you lose track of a story you really like.
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Agreed. Did you read part 3? It's up :)
(and thank you)
kittymeow13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Mhm! -w- I loved it. BUT WHY INTERRUPT IT???????? D:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
eh, well there IS a reason. I honestly don't want to make it a lemon story. I just don't see Jack y'know, doing it. With anyone. Let alone a mortal girl. I just can't see it and it doesn't sit right with me.
kittymeow13 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Good point. but serious cliffhanger bro. I was running around my house with my eyes crossed resisting to scream.
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*laughs, yeah. Sorry about that. But it does keep people wanting more :). Thats how i want it.
But don't worry there will be more JackxYou moments >u<
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WildChild109 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
And it keeps getting cuter! Awwwww!
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you!
KiraLovesMusic Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's so awesome~! I love this story! I read the first part, now missa is gonna read the second part! :iconhyperplz:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you :)
BlackCat609 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
YAAAY I love this! :dummy:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you. watch me for chapter updates?
Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am speechless. So much fluffy squeal worthy fluffiness. But I didn't squeal because it's 4:43 in the morning. Awwwwwwww~
Mayvi Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thanks :)
Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
booklover4life Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AND WE LUFF YA TOO!!! XD awesome!! I'm reading this secretly... I'm supposed to be asleep.... So I had to like stuff my blanket in my mouth at the first kiss part as to not wake my parents with all my squeals XDXDXD <3
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